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the deafening roar of silent screams
shattered hopes and broken dreams
endless strife from crimson streams
the demons ripping at my seams

the loss of thought and basic will
the promises, both good and ill
watching all as time stands still
the demons moving in to kill

fallen soldiers and murdered kings
bloodied rivers and murky springs
cries of death and sorrow sings
the demons tearing off my wings

wounds so deep that none will heal
unanswered wishes, begging to feel
none would think that it was real
becoming the demons' final meal
©2002-2009 ~firebrand
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Something that I needed to get out... I'm not sure if it's truly finished, but nonetheless, here it is.

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:icondymentia:
this is so unbelieveably depressing... highly emotional and very well written. But alas, it is not something I wish for you to feel... ever.

Hug

You need emotional release.
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wounds so deep that none will heal
unanswered wishes, begging to feel
none would think that it was real
becoming the demons' final meal
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those final lines.....I have felt one a many times in a silent dark room feeling sorry for my ills which I had caused, which I always cause. such a pitty, but that is only my own. I feel this is beautiful and written with such great emotion it speaks to me. it almost wakes me up from a sense of what I was doing to what I should. I know this may make no sense at all, but it makes perfect sense to me lol. beautiful read. fav

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and the earth bends to fill the void.
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WOW.. I never read poetry and understand it, but this really hits home.. really powerful use of words. +fav

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